REVISIONS-
I repositioned the main text to fill in some of the white space on page 2 and enlarged my primary perspective of the corridor on page 1 and aligned the the orthographic views. I tried to weight the pages more evenly with a 2:1 ratio on Page 1 and a 1:1:1 on Page 2. 
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ORIGINAL LAYOUT
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Wednesday, May 9, 2007
Midterm
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the poche colors could be in better synch (black in upper panel and green in lower). perhaps a similar hue (but darker) as green in boxes to the right. also, there is a lot of white. on the plus side, the individual drawings are great.
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